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坠江公交黑匣子:柔软的心作文 [最柔软的遇见]

2019年11月18日 08:33

【<】【p】【>】【我】【家】【有】【两】【个】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【手】【机】【迷】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【一】【个】【是】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【个】【是】【妈】【妈】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【当】【我】【走】【到】【十】【字】【路】【口】【时】【,】【一】【位】【穿】【着】【很】【时】【尚】【的】【阿】【姨】【骑】【着】【自】【行】【车】【从】【路】【口】【驶】【过】【,】【猛】【然】【间】【,】【一】【个】【三】【四】【岁】【的】【小】【男】【孩】【不】【知】【从】【哪】【冒】【出】【来】【。】【一】【声】【惊】【呼】【,】【小】【男】【孩】【被】【压】【在】【了】【车】【下】【,】【阿】【姨】【也】【随】【车】【倒】【下】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】坠江公交黑匣子【<】【p】【>】【可】【是】【,】【这】【一】【切】【都】【还】【没】【结】【束】【,】【又】【有】【几】【个】【同】【学】【向】【老】【师】【报】【告】【有】【些】【人】【在】【Q】【Q】【群】【里】【对】【答】【案】【。】【这】【个】【举】【报】【引】【起】【了】【许】【多】【人】【的】【抱】【怨】【和】【不】【满】【,】【这】【根】【本】【就】【不】【实】【际】【。】【有】【几】【个】【人】【立】【刻】【跳】【出】【来】【反】【对】【:】【有】【些】【人】【的】【试】【卷】【没】【带】【回】【来】【,】【交】【上】【去】【的】【都】【是】【空】【白】【的】【试】【卷】【,】【怎】【么】【没】【有】【被】【批】【评】【,】【我】【们】【互】【相】【讨】【论】【反】【而】【被】【批】【评】【。】【老】【师】【听】【了】【说】【:】【空】【白】【的】【说】【明】【没】【有】【犯】【错】【误】【,】【对】【答】【案】【的】【话】【肯】【定】【不】【可】【以】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【罢】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【最】【想】【说】【的】【第】【一】【句】【话】【是】【:】【写】【什】【么】【比】【怎】【样】【写】【更】【要】【紧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【关】【注】【作】【文】【怎】【么】【写】【的】【人】【很】【多】【,】【至】【于】【作】【文】【写】【什】【么】【,】【则】【很】【少】【有】【人】【问】【津】【。】【似】【乎】【只】【要】【知】【道】【了】【“】【怎】【么】【写】【”】【,】【就】【能】【写】【出】【一】【篇】【篇】【佳】【作】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【“】【巧】【妇】【难】【为】【无】【米】【之】【炊】【”】【,】【没】【有】【了】【米】【,】【又】【怎】【么】【去】【“】【为】【炊】【”】【呢】【?】【没】【有】【丰】【富】【生】【动】【的】【写】【作】【素】【材】【,】【又】【何】【能】【写】【出】【内】【容】【充】【实】【、】【让】【人】【喜】【欢】【的】【文】【章】【呢】【?】【就】【本】【文】【来】【说】【,】【下】【锅】【的】【“】【米】【”】【就】【显】【得】【少】【了】【些】【,】【而】【且】【这】【“】【米】【”】【的】【质】【量】【也】【并】【不】【高】【。】【一】【锅】【没】【有】【或】【很】【少】【有】【“】【米】【”】【的】【清】【汤】【寡】【水】【是】【不】【能】【让】【人】【果】【腹】【的】【;】【没】【有】【上】【好】【的】【“】【米】【”】【,】【做】【出】【来】【的】【饭】【,】【让】【人】【吃】【了】【也】【不】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【的】【篇】【幅】【较】【长】【而】【内】【容】【上】【却】【乏】【善】【可】【陈】【。】【如】【果】【把】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【内】【容】【浓】【缩】【一】【下】【,】【就】【会】【发】【现】【它】【是】【干】【瘪】【而】【苍】【白】【的】【。】【文】【中】【除】【了】【写】【母】【亲】【在】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【对】【“】【我】【”】【关】【爱】【和】【照】【顾】【的】【一】【些】【细】【节】【,】【主】【要】【写】【了】【一】【件】【事】【—】【—】【在】【“】【我】【”】【小】【时】【候】【,】【母】【亲】【是】【怎】【么】【化】【解】【家】【庭】【矛】【盾】【的】【,】【姐】【姐】【抱】【“】【我】【”】【不】【小】【心】【使】【我】【滑】【落】【在】【地】【,】【于】【是】【爷】【爷】【和】【爸】【爸】【为】【此】【事】【发】【生】【了】【矛】【盾】【,】【经】【妈】【妈】【的】【调】【解】【,】【全】【家】【又】【和】【好】【如】【初】【。】【这】【本】【是】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【件】【寻】【常】【小】【事】【,】【双】【方】【根】【本】【没】【必】【要】【为】【此】【而】【剑】【拔】【弩】【张】【,】【也】【没】【有】【必】【要】【小】【题】【大】【做】【,】【而】【且】【从】【中】【既】【看】【不】【出】【母】【亲】【解】【决】【问】【题】【的】【高】【明】【之】【处】【,】【也】【不】【见】【她】【的】【优】【良】【品】【德】【,】【所】【以】【严】【格】【地】【说】【,】【这】【一】【材】【料】【是】【不】【合】【格】【的】【,】【不】【应】【被】【选】【入】【文】【中】【,】【花】【了】【那】【么】【多】【笔】【墨】【去】【作】【详】【尽】【的】【描】【写】【,】【效】【果】【却】【是】【平】【淡】【如】【水】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【让】【别】【人】【记】【住】【你】【写】【的】【人】【物】【,】【必】【须】【突】【出】【人】【物】【的】【个】【性】【,】【也】【就】【是】【他】【的】【与】【众】【不】【同】【之】【处】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【看】【看】【文】【中】【的】【母】【亲】【,】【一】【大】【早】【就】【为】【“】【我】【”】【忙】【这】【忙】【那】【,】【吃】【饭】【时】【会】【把】【好】【的】【给】【“】【我】【”】【吃】【,】【睡】【觉】【时】【害】【怕】【“】【我】【”】【受】【凉】【,】【等】【等】【,】【而】【诸】【如】【此】【类】【的】【对】【子】【女】【的】【呵】【护】【和】【关】【心】【是】【每】【位】【母】【亲】【都】【会】【去】【做】【的】【,】【既】【然】【别】【的】【母】【亲】【也】【都】【这】【样】【做】【,】【那】【么】【,】【是】【不】【是】【可】【以】【少】【写】【或】【者】【不】【写】【,】【当】【然】【,】【作】【为】【母】【亲】【,】【总】【有】【共】【性】【,】【但】【共】【性】【要】【通】【过】【个】【性】【来】【表】【现】【,】【每】【个】【母】【亲】【在】【爱】【孩】【子】【和】【教】【育】【孩】【子】【方】【面】【也】【必】【有】【自】【己】【的】【方】【式】【和】【独】【到】【之】【处】【,】【这】【就】【需】【要】【我】【们】【去】【发】【现】【,】【要】【去】【捕】【捉】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【生】【活】【中】【的】【细】【节】【。】【如】【果】【材】【料】【是】【一】【般】【的】【材】【料】【,】【即】【使】【让】【写】【作】【高】【手】【来】【写】【,】【恐】【怕】【也】【难】【以】【取】【得】【好】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【到】【底】【,】【“】【写】【什】【么】【”】【的】【问】【题】【,】【也】【属】【于】【“】【怎】【么】【写】【”】【的】【范】【畴】【之】【内】【,】【不】【过】【,】【“】【写】【什】【么】【”】【更】【重】【在】【材】【料】【的】【发】【现】【和】【选】【择】【。】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【,】【远】【近】【高】【低】【各】【不】【同】【”】【,】【这】【是】【写】【“】【山】【”】【;】【横】【、】【侧】【、】【远】【、】【近】【、】【高】【、】【低】【,】【如】【果】【离】【开】【了】【“】【山】【”】【,】【也】【就】【失】【去】【了】【依】【傍】【,】【在】【这】【里】【,】【“】【山】【”】【是】【第】【一】【位】【的】【。】【在】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【中】【,】【视】【野】【里】【,】【可】【写】【的】【东】【西】【虽】【然】【称】【不】【上】【是】【俯】【拾】【皆】【是】【,】【但】【“】【身】【在】【宝】【山】【”】【的】【感】【触】【,】【则】【应】【该】【是】【每】【位】【同】【学】【都】【有】【的】【吧】【,】【只】【要】【做】【有】【心】【人】【,】【花】【大】【力】【气】【去】【发】【现】【和】【收】【集】【材】【料】【,】【值】【得】【一】【写】【的】【东】【西】【真】【是】【太】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【罢】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【最】【想】【说】【的】【第】【二】【句】【话】【是】【:】【在】【追】【求】【语】【言】【美】【之】【前】【,】【先】【把】【基】【本】【功】【练】【好】【,】【把】【废】【话】【、】【空】【话】【、】【套】【话】【从】【文】【中】【剔】【除】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【说】【文】【章】【的】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【。】【“】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【润】【滑】【剂】【”】【“】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【‘】【总】【经】【理】【’】【”】【“】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【‘】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【’】【”】【,】【从】【字】【面】【上】【看】【,】【三】【个】【比】【喻】【都】【很】【形】【象】【,】【很】【美】【,】【但】【是】【除】【了】【“】【润】【滑】【剂】【”】【差】【强】【人】【意】【,】【“】【总】【经】【理】【”】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【”】【则】【皆】【有】【华】【而】【不】【实】【之】【嫌】【,】【因】【为】【从】【文】【中】【所】【写】【来】【看】【,】【母】【亲】【是】【无】【法】【承】【受】【这】【两】【顶】【“】【帽】【子】【”】【之】【重】【的】【,】【她】【既】【无】【总】【经】【理】【之】【才】【,】【也】【无】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【”】【之】【能】【,】【她】【仅】【是】【个】【普】【通】【的】【母】【亲】【,】【我】【们】【不】【需】【要】【人】【为】【地】【给】【她】【戴】【上】【漂】【亮】【的】【帽】【子】【,】【只】【要】【用】【朴】【素】【的】【语】【言】【写】【出】【她】【平】【凡】【中】【的】【可】【敬】【之】【处】【就】【可】【以】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【要】【删】【除】【文】【中】【那】【些】【可】【有】【可】【无】【的】【话】【,】【恐】【怕】【文】【章】【就】【所】【剩】【无】【几】【了】【。】【有】【的】【整】【段】【可】【以】【删】【去】【(】【如】【题】【记】【、】【第】【一】【段】【)】【,】【有】【些】【可】【以】【大】【大】【地】【压】【缩】【(】【如】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【”】【这】【一】【部】【分】【)】【。】【文】【中】【还】【有】【几】【处】【套】【话】【大】【话】【,】【与】【学】【生】【的】【身】【份】【不】【符】【,】【这】【在】【旁】【批】【中】【已】【经】【指】【出】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【平】【时】【不】【注】【重】【材】【料】【积】【累】【,】【又】【不】【懂】【得】【什】【么】【样】【的】【材】【料】【才】【是】【好】【材】【料】【,】【不】【重】【视】【语】【言】【基】【本】【功】【的】【训】【练】【,】【怎】【么】【能】【够】【写】【出】【好】【文】【章】【呢】【?】【当】【然】【,】【这】【也】【不】【能】【怪】【我】【们】【的】【学】【生】【,】【因】【为】【现】【在】【的】【教】【育】【体】【制】【问】【题】【甚】【多】【,】【整】【个】【语】【文】【教】【学】【效】【率】【低】【下】【,】【但】【只】【要】【对】【写】【作】【有】【兴】【趣】【,】【善】【于】【从】【阅】【读】【中】【去】【汲】【取】【写】【作】【的】【养】【料】【,】【写】【好】【作】【文】【还】【是】【大】【有】【希】【望】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】坠江公交黑匣子【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【[】【1】【]】【你】【的】【生】【命】【里】【有】【过】【我】【,】【我】【的】【生】【命】【中】【不】【曾】【缺】【少】【你】【,】【在】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【们】【没】【有】【错】【过】【,】【这】【是】【几】【千】【年】【的】【轮】【回】【才】【能】【修】【来】【的】【缘】【分】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【[】【2】【]】【母】【亲】【,】【陪】【伴】【我】【走】【过】【了】【1】【个】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【。】【繁】【重】【的】【家】【务】【,】【琐】【碎】【的】【小】【事】【…】【…】【这】【些】【并】【没】【有】【让】【母】【亲】【美】【丽】【的】【容】【颜】【日】【益】【老】【去】【,】【在】【我】【的】【心】【里】【,】【【】【1】【】】【她】【依】【然】【拥】【有】【年】【轻】【时】【的】【美】【貌】【;】【而】【随】【着】【年】【龄】【的】【增】【长】【,】【我】【更】【多】【地】【看】【到】【了】【母】【亲】【慈】【爱】【的】【眼】【神】【,】【感】【受】【到】【了】【她】【身】【上】【浓】【浓】【的】【母】【性】【关】【怀】【。】【母】【亲】【,】【正】【因】【为】【一】【路】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【有】【了】【如】【此】【温】【馨】【的】【家】【庭】【;】【正】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【的】【生】【命】【从】【不】【曾】【感】【到】【孤】【单】【。】【母】【亲】【,】【感】【谢】【你】【,】【让】【我】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【是】【真】【正】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【润】【滑】【剂】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【[】【3】【]】【我】【还】【年】【幼】【时】【,】【姐】【姐】【在】【上】【初】【二】【,】【那】【时】【的】【我】【十】【分】【调】【皮】【。】【一】【次】【我】【上】【完】【幼】【儿】【园】【回】【到】【家】【,】【上】【蹿】【下】【跳】【,】【硬】【要】【姐】【姐】【抱】【,】【不】【料】【没】【有】【抱】【小】【孩】【经】【验】【的】【,】【姐】【姐】【一】【不】【小】【心】【把】【我】【从】【她】【的】【手】【中】【滑】【了】【下】【去】【。】【不】【一】【会】【儿】【头】【上】【便】【肿】【起】【了】【一】【个】【包】【。】【我】【顿】【时】【嚎】【啕】【大】【哭】【,】【母】【亲】【则】【来】【安】【慰】【我】【。】【一】【向】【很】【宠】【我】【的】【爷】【爷】【很】【生】【气】【,】【不】【停】【地】【责】【怪】【姐】【姐】【,】【为】【什】【么】【不】【认】【真】【照】【顾】【我】【。】【爸】【爸】【觉】【得】【姐】【姐】【年】【纪】【小】【,】【也】【不】【是】【故】【意】【的】【,】【则】【为】【姐】【姐】【【】【2】【】】【申】【辩】【。】【姐】【姐】【一】【个】【人】【觉】【得】【怪】【委】【屈】【的】【,】【一】【直】【蹲】【在】【墙】【角】【哭】【。】【看】【似】【一】【场】【【】【3】【】】【硝】【烟】【味】【很】【浓】【的】【“】【爷】【爸】【”】【战】【争】【就】【要】【拉】【开】【帷】【幕】【了】【。】【别】【忘】【了】【,】【母】【亲】【还】【没】【出】【场】【呢】【!】【关】【键】【时】【刻】【她】【总】【是】【最】【冷】【静】【的】【,】【见】【场】【面】【不】【妙】【,】【母】【亲】【停】【下】【了】【手】【中】【的】【活】【,】【赶】【紧】【上】【来】【做】【调】【解】【员】【。】【她】【先】【从】【最】【难】【“】【对】【付】【”】【的】【人】【物】【—】【—】【爷】【爷】【入】【手】【。】【母】【亲】【先】【从】【柜】【里】【给】【爷】【爷】【拿】【了】【一】【包】【好】【烟】【都】【是】【平】【时】【舍】【不】【得】【自】【己】【抽】【专】【送】【人】【的】【招】【呼】【他】【老】【人】【家】【去】【打】【麻】【将】【了】【。】【给】【爸】【爸】【做】【工】【作】【当】【然】【难】【不】【倒】【母】【亲】【了】【。】【她】【的】【三】【言】【两】【语】【就】【让】【爸】【爸】【心】【平】【气】【和】【地】【笑】【了】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【[】【4】【]】【母】【亲】【做】【了】【一】【大】【桌】【的】【【】【4】【】】【满】【汉】【全】【席】【,】【来】【犒】【劳】【【】【5】【】】【犒】【劳】【爷】【爷】【,】【我】【们】【一】【家】【子】【都】【是】【贪】【吃】【的】【人】【,】【看】【到】【好】【吃】【的】【都】【眉】【开】【眼】【笑】【了】【,】【白】【天】【那】【件】【不】【快】【的】【事】【都】【抛】【到】【脑】【后】【了】【,】【一】【家】【人】【又】【恢】【复】【其】【乐】【融】【融】【的】【状】【态】【了】【。】【就】【这】【样】【,】【看】【似】【一】【场】【战】【争】【就】【这】【样】【被】【平】【息】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【[】【5】【]】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【“】【总】【经】【理】【”】【。】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【随】【着】【岁】【月】【的】【流】【逝】【,】【【】【6】【】】【我】【逐】【渐】【迈】【入】【了】【小】【学】【的】【校】【园】【,】【开】【始】【懂】【得】【了】【爱】【与】【被】【爱】【上】【小】【学】【,】【【】【7】【】】【每】【天】【都】【要】【一】【大】【清】【早】【起】【床】【。】【每】【当】【我】【睁】【开】【矇】【眬】【的】【睡】【眼】【,】【看】【到】【床】【前】【叠】【着】【整】【整】【齐】【齐】【的】【校】【服】【,】【听】【到】【母】【亲】【仓】【促】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【闻】【到】【从】【厨】【房】【飘】【出】【来】【的】【一】【阵】【阵】【饭】【香】【心】【中】【会】【涌】【起】【一】【阵】【莫】【名】【的】【感】【动】【。】【【】【8】【】】【从】【我】【上】【小】【学】【起】【,】【母】【亲】【没】【有】【睡】【过】【一】【天】【好】【觉】【母】【亲】【总】【是】【把】【家】【里】【收】【拾】【得】【井】【井】【有】【条】【,】【所】【以】【大】【家】【一】【致】【推】【举】【她】【为】【“】【爱】【的】【港】【湾】【”】【总】【经】【理】【。】【爸】【爸】【一】【直】【有】【春】【节】【自】【编】【自】【写】【春】【联】【的】【习】【惯】【,】【记】【不】【清】【哪】【年】【春】【联】【横】【批】【正】【好】【是】【“】【爱】【的】【港】【湾】【”】【。】【四】【个】【大】【字】【贴】【在】【门】【框】【上】【方】【,】【自】【此】【邻】【居】【就】【叫】【习】【惯】【了】【,】【我】【家】【也】【默】【认】【了】【,】【“】【爱】【的】【港】【湾】【”】【从】【此】【成】【了】【我】【家】【的】【代】【名】【词】【。】【母】【亲】【则】【是】【当】【之】【无】【愧】【的】【总】【经】【理】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【[】【6】【]】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【十】【个】【春】【秋】【已】【走】【过】【,】【迈】【入】【了】【初】【中】【的】【校】【园】【。】【【】【9】【】】【岁】【月】【见】【证】【着】【母】【亲】【脸】【上】【的】【那】【一】【道】【道】【深】【深】【浅】【浅】【的】【皱】【纹】【。】【何】【时】【皱】【纹】【也】【会】【爬】【上】【母】【亲】【的】【额】【头】【?】【这】【是】【我】【不】【曾】【想】【到】【。】【的】【在】【我】【心】【里】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【脸】【庞】【总】【是】【如】【年】【轻】【时】【那】【般】【美】【丽】【,】【从】【没】【想】【过】【有】【一】【天】【母】【亲】【也】【会】【老】【。】【【】【1】【0】【】】【此】【时】【的】【我】【,】【不】【再】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【,】【也】【不】【再】【与】【母】【亲】【吵】【闹】【赌】【气】【,】【因】【为】【我】【终】【于】【感】【悟】【到】【母】【爱】【背】【后】【所】【蕴】【藏】【的】【伟】【大】【与】【无】【私】【吃】【饭】【时】【,】【母】【亲】【总】【把】【精】【华】【之】【处】【让】【给】【了】【【】【1】【1】【】】【我】【们】【;】【玩】【耍】【时】【,】【母】【亲】【总】【是】【帮】【我】【们】【提】【着】【包】【远】【远】【地】【望】【着】【,】【嘴】【角】【总】【挂】【着】【一】【丝】【满】【足】【的】【笑】【容】【;】【比】【赛】【场】【上】【,】【母】【亲】【会】【为】【我】【加】【油】【助】【威】【,】【就】【连】【她】【一】【个】【鼓】【励】【的】【暗】【示】【性】【眼】【神】【也】【会】【让】【我】【信】【心】【倍】【增】【;】【睡】【觉】【时】【,】【【】【1】【2】【】】【母】【亲】【总】【把】【被】【子】【往】【我】【们】【身】【上】【挪】【。】【这】【样】【的】【一】【点】【一】【滴】【举】【动】【之】【中】【透】【露】【出】【母】【亲】【对】【我】【们】【的】【爱】【与】【奉】【献】【。】【她】【正】【是】【我】【的】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【耗】【费】【自】【己】【的】【能】【量】【,】【【】【1】【3】【】】【在】【前】【进】【的】【道】【路】【上】【引】【领】【着】【我】【一】【步】【步】【走】【得】【更】【远】【,】【向】【着】【更】【大】【的】【目】【标】【迈】【进】【;】【遇】【到】【障】【碍】【和】【挫】【折】【时】【,】【她】【会】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【冲】【在】【前】【面】【,】【为】【我】【遮】【风】【挡】【雨】【,】【【】【1】【4】【】】【扫】【清】【前】【进】【途】【中】【的】【障】【碍】【,】【并】【告】【诉】【我】【如】【何】【能】【更】【坚】【定】【、】【更】【勇】【敢】【地】【走】【下】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【我】【爱】【我】【的】【家】【,】【爱】【每】【一】【个】【人】【。】【母】【亲】【更】【是】【值】【得】【我】【去】【深】【爱】【,】【去】【感】【恩】【!】【母】【亲】【,】【你】【不】【仅】【仅】【给】【予】【了】【我】【生】【命】【,】【【】【1】【5】【】】【更】【让】【我】【明】【白】【了】【如】【何】【在】【平】【凡】【中】【去】【找】【寻】【幸】【福】【,】【如】【何】【在】【逆】【境】【中】【变】【得】【勇】【敢】【。】【感】【谢】【有】【你】【一】【路】【的】【陪】【伴】【,】【带】【给】【我】【一】【路】【的】【坚】【强】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【1】【]】【这】【个】【题】【记】【可】【删】【。】【与】【下】【文】【内】【容】【并】【无】【关】【联】【。】【不】【要】【写】【什】【么】【文】【章】【,】【上】【来】【就】【写】【个】【题】【记】【,】【几】【百】【字】【的】【作】【文】【,】【篇】【幅】【有】【限】【,】【要】【充】【分】【利】【用】【有】【限】【的】【篇】【幅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【】】【既】【然】【前】【面】【讲】【了】【“】【并】【没】【有】【让】【母】【亲】【美】【丽】【的】【容】【颜】【日】【益】【老】【去】【”】【,】【这】【里】【再】【说】【“】【她】【依】【然】【拥】【有】【年】【轻】【时】【的】【美】【貌】【”】【,】【就】【属】【多】【余】【。】【“】【母】【亲】【慈】【爱】【的】【眼】【神】【”】【不】【应】【该】【是】【年】【龄】【增】【长】【后】【才】【看】【到】【的】【,】【小】【的】【时】【候】【就】【应】【看】【到】【。】【画】【线】【句】【与】【上】【文】【脱】【节】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【2】【]】【从】【总】【体】【上】【看】【,】【这】【一】【段】【的】【内】【容】【比】【较】【空】【泛】【,】【也】【在】【删】【除】【之】【列】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【3】【]】【这】【一】【部】【分】【只】【写】【了】【一】【件】【事】【,】【而】【要】【靠】【这】【件】【事】【来】【表】【现】【母】【亲】【善】【于】【解】【决】【矛】【盾】【、】【调】【节】【气】【氛】【,】【显】【然】【分】【量】【不】【够】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【连】【这】【样】【一】【件】【小】【事】【都】【会】【引】【起】【矛】【盾】【,】【这】【个】【家】【庭】【似】【乎】【难】【有】【宁】【日】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【2】【】】【“】【申】【辩】【”】【不】【妥】【,】【可】【改】【为】【“】【辩】【护】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【3】【】】【“】【硝】【烟】【味】【很】【浓】【”】【一】【词】【用】【得】【不】【妥】【,】【分】【量】【太】【重】【,】【毕】【竟】【是】【为】【一】【件】【琐】【事】【而】【发】【生】【的】【小】【矛】【盾】【,】【所】【以】【将】【硝】【烟】【味】【加】【上】【“】【 】【”】【号】【好】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【段】【几】【行】【语】【言】【嗦】【,】【不】【得】【不】【作】【较】【多】【删】【除】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【4】【】】【所】【谓】【“】【满】【汉】【全】【席】【”】【是】【清】【宫】【廷】【宴】【,】【有】【几】【十】【道】【菜】【肴】【,】【不】【是】【一】【般】【人】【家】【能】【做】【得】【出】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【5】【】】【“】【犒】【劳】【”】【一】【词】【用】【得】【不】【当】【,】【可】【改】【为】【“】【孝】【敬】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【4】【]】【前】【面】【已】【让】【人】【感】【到】【这】【个】【家】【庭】【会】【因】【为】【一】【件】【小】【事】【儿】【而】【导】【致】【战】【事】【,】【这】【里】【又】【让】【人】【感】【到】【这】【是】【一】【个】【“】【贪】【吃】【”】【的】【家】【庭】【。】【这】【些】【对】【写】【好】【母】【亲】【的】【形】【象】【是】【不】【利】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【6】【】】【“】【逐】【渐】【”】【是】【一】【个】【过】【程】【,】【用】【在】【这】【里】【不】【当】【。】【这】【句】【话】【改】【为】【“】【我】【上】【了】【小】【学】【”】【即】【可】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【7】【】】【画】【线】【句】【可】【压】【缩】【为】【“】【每】【天】【早】【上】【醒】【来】【”】【。】【叙】【事】【应】【节】【省】【笔】【墨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【8】【】】【画】【线】【句】【讲】【得】【有】【些】【过】【分】【了】【。】【要】【把】【握】【分】【寸】【,】【说】【过】【了】【头】【,】【反】【而】【适】【得】【其】【反】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【5】【]】【这】【一】【段】【主】【要】【写】【了】【母】【亲】【料】【理】【家】【务】【的】【事】【,】【恐】【怕】【谁】【家】【的】【母】【亲】【都】【是】【这】【样】【做】【的】【,】【而】【“】【总】【经】【理】【”】【所】【管】【的】【事】【应】【该】【是】【方】【方】【面】【面】【的】【。】【说】【母】【亲】【是】【“】【当】【之】【无】【愧】【的】【总】【经】【理】【”】【就】【不】【当】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【6】【]】【把】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【”】【引】【入】【小】【标】【题】【是】【新】【颖】【的】【,】【下】【文】【就】【应】【写】【出】【母】【亲】【的】【“】【导】【航】【”】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【9】【】】【画】【线】【句】【不】【通】【,】【此】【句】【可】【改】【为】【“】【母】【亲】【脸】【上】【开】【始】【有】【了】【皱】【纹】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【0】【】】【看】【到】【母】【亲】【额】【头】【上】【的】【皱】【纹】【,】【就】【能】【够】【“】【不】【再】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【,】【也】【不】【再】【与】【母】【亲】【吵】【闹】【赌】【气】【”】【,】【就】【“】【感】【悟】【到】【母】【爱】【背】【后】【所】【蕴】【藏】【的】【伟】【大】【与】【无】【私】【”】【,】【让】【人】【感】【到】【不】【够】【真】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【1】【】】【连】【用】【两】【个】【“】【我】【们】【”】【,】【似】【乎】【应】【该】【都】【是】【“】【我】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【2】【】】【这】【一】【细】【节】【也】【欠】【真】【实】【,】【家】【里】【不】【至】【于】【只】【有】【一】【床】【被】【子】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【3】【】】【画】【线】【句】【有】【明】【显】【的】【套】【话】【、】【大】【话】【痕】【迹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【一】【段】【写】【的】【仍】【是】【母】【亲】【在】【生】【活】【上】【对】【自】【己】【的】【照】【顾】【和】【关】【心】【,】【而】【小】【标】【题】【却】【称】【母】【亲】【是】【家】【庭】【的】【“】【G】【P】【S】【导】【航】【仪】【”】【,】【两】【者】【不】【能】【统】【一】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【4】【】】【又】【是】【套】【话】【,】【你】【前】【进】【路】【上】【的】【障】【碍】【,】【母】【亲】【能】【为】【你】【扫】【除】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【5】【】】【作】【为】【文】【章】【的】【结】【尾】【,】【有】【总】【结】【全】【文】【的】【作】【用】【。】【画】【线】【句】【在】【前】【文】【中】【得】【不】【到】【落】【实】【,】【可】【以】【说】【是】【偏】【离】【了】【全】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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坠江公交黑匣子:【“碎片化”旅游】 碎片化阅读作文

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【与】【人】【之】【间】【的】【交】【流】【往】【往】【被】【现】【代】【人】【所】【忽】【视】【。】【其】【实】【,】【人】【与】【人】【之】【间】【真】【诚】【的】【关】【爱】【,】【可】【以】【抚】【慰】【一】【颗】【受】【伤】【的】【心】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【是】【几】【年】【前】【的】【一】【个】【下】【午】【,】【母】【亲】【把】【幼】【小】【的】【我】【送】【到】【车】【站】【,】【让】【我】【一】【个】【人】【去】【外】【婆】【家】【。】【那】【是】【我】【第】【一】【次】【独】【自】【乘】【车】【,】【母】【亲】【反】【复】【叮】【嘱】【我】【要】【多】【加】【小】【心】【,】【不】【要】【和】【陌】【生】【人】【说】【话】【等】【等】【,】【这】【越】【发】【使】【我】【紧】【张】【起】【来】【。】【车】【进】【站】【了】【,】【母】【亲】【把】【我】【送】【上】【了】【车】【,】【并】【再】【次】【重】【复】【了】【那】【些】【话】【。】【随】【后】【,】【又】【不】【放】【心】【地】【拜】【托】【售】【票】【员】【对】【我】【多】【加】【照】【顾】【。】【车】【终】【于】【开】【动】【了】【,】【我】【依】【依】【不】【舍】【地】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【,】【母】【亲】【越】【来】【越】【远】【、】【越】【来】【越】【小】【,】【直】【到】【再】【也】【看】【不】【见】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【时】【,】【我】【的】【心】【真】【的】【提】【了】【起】【来】【。】【周】【围】【是】【一】【张】【张】【陌】【生】【的】【脸】【,】【冷】【冷】【的】【,】【面】【无】【表】【情】【。】【我】【害】【怕】【极】【了】【,】【记】【得】【当】【时】【只】【是】【傻】【傻】【地】【看】【着】【窗】【外】【车】【来】【人】【往】【的】【情】【景】【,】【手】【紧】【紧】【地】【抓】【住】【扶】【手】【,】【一】【动】【也】【不】【敢】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【当】【车】【行】【驶】【到】【北】【京】【路】【时】【突】【然】【停】【了】【下】【来】【,】【原】【来】【是】【车】【发】【动】【不】【起】【来】【了】【。】【人】【群】【开】【始】【骚】【动】【起】【来】【。】【我】【不】【知】【所】【措】【地】【站】【在】【原】【地】【,】【茫】【然】【地】【望】【着】【周】【围】【,】【“】【不】【行】【了】【!】【还】【是】【下】【车】【吧】【!】【”】【司】【机】【终】【于】【无】【奈】【地】【发】【话】【了】【。】【听】【了】【这】【话】【人】【们】【纷】【纷】【不】【满】【起】【来】【,】【骂】【骂】【咧】【咧】【地】【不】【情】【愿】【地】【挤】【着】【下】【车】【。】【而】【我】【却】【木】【木】【地】【站】【在】【那】【里】【,】【不】【知】【如】【何】【是】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【快】【走】【啊】【!】【杵】【在】【这】【儿】【干】【嘛】【?】【”】【一】【个】【妇】【女】【尖】【声】【怪】【气】【地】【对】【我】【嚷】【道】【。】【我】【还】【是】【呆】【呆】【地】【一】【动】【不】【动】【,】【我】【只】【想】【着】【母】【亲】【让】【我】【在】【天】【津】【路】【下】【车】【,】【并】【没】【说】【现】【在】【下】【啊】【!】【我】【不】【能】【下】【!】【于】【是】【,】【我】【坚】【守】【着】【不】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【快】【下】【车】【!】【别】【挡】【道】【儿】【!】【别】【人】【还】【要】【下】【呢】【!】【”】【售】【票】【员】【开】【始】【不】【满】【地】【推】【搡】【我】【。】【直】【到】【现】【在】【我】【也】【没】【弄】【明】【白】【,】【当】【时】【我】【居】【然】【没】【有】【哭】【出】【来】【。】【也】【许】【,】【那】【个】【时】【候】【我】【真】【的】【吓】【傻】【了】【。】【“】【她】【还】【是】【个】【小】【孩】【子】【,】【况】【且】【人】【家】【母】【亲】【特】【意】【关】【照】【过】【的】【,】【怎】【么】【可】【以】【让】【她】【一】【个】【人】【走】【呢】【?】【”】【终】【于】【有】【一】【个】【阿】【姨】【为】【我】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【了】【。】【她】【拉】【起】【我】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【走】【,】【我】【们】【下】【车】【,】【小】【心】【点】【儿】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【就】【这】【样】【莫】【名】【其】【妙】【地】【被】【带】【下】【了】【车】【。】【过】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【又】【来】【了】【辆】【2】【0】【路】【车】【。】【那】【位】【好】【心】【的】【阿】【姨】【把】【我】【带】【了】【上】【去】【,】【并】【为】【我】【买】【了】【票】【。】【“】【你】【在】【什】【么】【地】【方】【下】【车】【?】【”】【她】【关】【切】【地】【问】【。】【“】【天】【津】【路】【。】【”】【我】【讷】【讷】【地】【回】【答】【。】【我】【当】【时】【一】【心】【在】【想】【下】【车】【后】【该】【怎】【么】【去】【外】【婆】【家】【,】【根】【本】【没】【在】【意】【她】【的】【关】【心】【。】【车】【终】【于】【到】【站】【了】【,】【看】【到】【熟】【悉】【的】【外】【婆】【家】【,】【我】【的】【心】【情】【又】【好】【了】【起】【来】【。】【我】【蹦】【蹦】【跳】【跳】【地】【下】【了】【车】【,】【身】【后】【传】【来】【那】【位】【阿】【姨】【的】【声】【音】【:】【“】【小】【心】【啊】【!】【”】【我】【应】【了】【一】【声】【,】【就】【一】【路】【跑】【走】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【外】【婆】【家】【回】【来】【后】【,】【我】【把】【这】【件】【事】【告】【诉】【了】【妈】【妈】【,】【妈】【妈】【惊】【讶】【地】【问】【我】【,】【当】【时】【为】【什】【么】【不】【说】【声】【“】【谢】【谢】【”】【!】【我】【这】【才】【醒】【悟】【,】【但】【为】【时】【已】【晚】【。】【至】【今】【,】【我】【都】【后】【悔】【自】【己】【没】【亲】【口】【对】【那】【位】【好】【心】【的】【阿】【姨】【说】【声】【“】【谢】【谢】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【在】【文】【中】【有】【感】【而】【发】【提】【出】【了】【“】【关】【爱】【”】【的】【话】【题】【,】【令】【人】【欣】【慰】【,】【也】【引】【人】【深】【思】【。】【在】【众】【人】【冷】【漠】【的】【神】【情】【中】【,】【第】【一】【次】【独】【自】【乘】【车】【的】【“】【我】【”】【出】【于】【对】【陌】【生】【人】【的】【恐】【惧】【而】【不】【知】【所】【措】【。】【一】【位】【助】【人】【为】【乐】【的】【阿】【姨】【热】【情】【地】【一】【路】【护】【送】【“】【我】【”】【,】【才】【使】【“】【我】【”】【“】【转】【危】【为】【安】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【所】【写】【的】【虽】【然】【是】【一】【件】【平】【凡】【的】【小】【事】【,】【但】【它】【却】【折】【射】【出】【了】【人】【间】【关】【爱】【的】【光】【辉】【。】【毕】【竟】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【中】【还】【有】【不】【少】【的】【热】【心】【人】【。】【文】【章】【朴】【实】【无】【华】【,】【但】【立】【意】【却】【很】【深】【远】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【张】【风】【辉】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】坠江公交黑匣子【<】【p】【>】【这】【才】【刚】【吃】【完】【晚】【饭】【,】【替】【我】【检】【查】【完】【作】【业】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【歪】【在】【沙】【发】【的】【左】【边】【,】【看】【着】【他】【手】【机】【上】【的】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【今】【日】【头】【条】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【;】【妈】【妈】【躺】【在】【沙】【发】【的】【右】【边】【,】【看】【着】【电】【子】【书】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

坠江公交黑匣子:杜威知道

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